[OWASP-TESTING] Testing Project phase 1, ver .7

Daniel Daniel at deeper.co.za
Fri Jul 2 08:14:24 EDT 2004


Agreed, there are some comments still which we all need to decide on the
outcome/output



> Don't forget, when we're done with this, we're hopefully going to get
> this thing in front of a tech-writer.  They'll be able to do some more
> of the basic grammar and giving one voice type changes as well.  The key
> right now is to make sure the technical stuff is correct and on target
> for the message we want to deliver.
>
> -Larry
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Andrew van der Stock [mailto:vanderaj at greebo.net]
> Sent: Friday, July 02, 2004 7:18 AM
> To: Daniel at deeper.co.za
> Cc: 'owasp '
> Subject: RE: [OWASP-TESTING] Testing Project phase 1, ver .7
>
>
> Soon!
>
> There's several differing writing styles in play, and that needs to be
> reduced to one for a cohesive document.
>
> I'm going to normalize them against third party impersonal and change
> the rhetorical questions to statements. The TOC will thank us.
>
> Andrew
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: owasp-testing-admin at lists.sourceforge.net
> [mailto:owasp-testing-admin at lists.sourceforge.net] On Behalf Of Daniel
> Sent: Friday, 2 July 2004 8:09 PM
> To: owasp
> Subject: RE: [OWASP-TESTING] Testing Project phase 1, ver .7
>
> I'll be brutal, send me the version once your done and ill hack away :0)
>
> my god, could we nearly be at a point of release?
>
>
>
>> <Brutal editor mode>
>>
>> I'm highlighting wordy sections that add nothing to the document in
>> light puke green.
>>
>> Can someone after me make an executive decision to keep, delete or
>> re-word these sections?
>>
>> </Brutal editor mode>
>>
>> Andrew
>>
>>
>>
>>
>
>
>
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