[OWASP-TESTING] Testing Project phase 1, ver .7

Shields, Larry Larry.Shields at FMR.COM
Fri Jul 2 08:42:00 EDT 2004


Don't forget, when we're done with this, we're hopefully going to get
this thing in front of a tech-writer.  They'll be able to do some more
of the basic grammar and giving one voice type changes as well.  The key
right now is to make sure the technical stuff is correct and on target
for the message we want to deliver.

-Larry

-----Original Message-----
From: Andrew van der Stock [mailto:vanderaj at greebo.net] 
Sent: Friday, July 02, 2004 7:18 AM
To: Daniel at deeper.co.za
Cc: 'owasp '
Subject: RE: [OWASP-TESTING] Testing Project phase 1, ver .7


Soon!

There's several differing writing styles in play, and that needs to be
reduced to one for a cohesive document.

I'm going to normalize them against third party impersonal and change
the rhetorical questions to statements. The TOC will thank us. 

Andrew

-----Original Message-----
From: owasp-testing-admin at lists.sourceforge.net
[mailto:owasp-testing-admin at lists.sourceforge.net] On Behalf Of Daniel
Sent: Friday, 2 July 2004 8:09 PM
To: owasp 
Subject: RE: [OWASP-TESTING] Testing Project phase 1, ver .7

I'll be brutal, send me the version once your done and ill hack away :0)

my god, could we nearly be at a point of release?



> <Brutal editor mode>
>
> I'm highlighting wordy sections that add nothing to the document in 
> light puke green.
>
> Can someone after me make an executive decision to keep, delete or 
> re-word these sections?
>
> </Brutal editor mode>
>
> Andrew
>
>
>
>




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