[OWASP-GUIDE] Re: [OWASP-LEADERS] Black Hat Presentation draft - please review and comment
rogan at dawes.za.net
Wed Jun 8 05:12:26 EDT 2005
Andrew van der Stock wrote:
> Hi folks,
> I need feedback on this by no later than June 13 as that's the submission
> On the Mac (which is the platform I will be using), there are
> semi-translucent shadows on the text which make it readable. I am not sure
> if PC people get to see the shadows. I'm going to lighten the background
> image up considerably to avoid this issue altogether.
> What it looks like on my Mac:
> (364 kb)
> I will be introducing only a few more slides (ie one per chapter).
> I will be _reducing_ the content in each slide, by either making a new slide
> from one over-full slide, or simply making the slide more "bullet pointy".
> (My presentation style is not to read the Powerpoint, but to elucidate for
> at least a few minutes on each, touching on each of the topics.)
> Thoughts gratefully welcomed
You use the word "canocalization" on one of your slides. I think you are
looking for "canonicalization", derived from "canonical" as in
"Use compiler features, correct THEM fast" ?
you may want to change the download URL to
"documentation/guide/downloads.html" to fit it onto one line
"If I don't get AN answer for you"
I'm also not sure what you are aiming for under the "Threat Risk Model"
slide. There are a lot more assets than reputation and user posts and
attachments in general. On this slide, you don't seem to be talking
about a specific BBS product, so you may want to be more general?
Hope this helped.
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